For my blog 10 I decided to reflect on what my conference with Mat was about. He read my essay and asked if I had any particular questions and all I answered with was i wanted to make sure that I was doing the format correctly and it wasn't too much like project 1. Mat told me my essay looked good so far but to focus more on the design of the websites I used such as Men's Fitness rather than talking about what the actual content was. He also told me to delete or redo the one paragraph that i mentioned that text and maybe delete some other parts since i was already closed to 2000 words. I will do this corrections one day this week in hopes of doing better on this project than i did on project 1.
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